trench diary

We were making a diary of what it was like in World War! I didn't get much done because I didnt really know what it was like in the war.

     

 WALT describe using our senses

	Huge rats were every some were even the size of cats.bombs exploding everywhere.
	I can here There was noise everywhere and we couldn't get away from it guns grenades  bombs every thing .
	I can taste the plant dust the dry biscuits. Dust and dirt
	I can smell smoke everywhere and the smell of  gunpowder.
	I can feel the soggy wet ground on the floor of our trenches it is a lot worse in winter sometimes the trenches flood!
	I feel  fear and want to go back to New Zealand where home is.
	I think of going  back to New Zealand every day.

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